[@Calle] Hey there :) Sorry if anything I said made you nervous to post your review :/ Anyway, figured the events of my story could use a little clarification, as I don't think I did a very good job of making it clear what actually happened. [hider= Spoilers I guess?] - Before the events of the story, Jenny's father hits Malcolm Brady in a drunk driving incident - He gets a funeral, but nobody really goes along - Taking us to the start of the story, where Jenny has, somewhat ghoulishly, decided to go to the funeral of the man her father killed. [/hider] Like I said though, I don't think I did a very good job making it clear what was happening, and if I were to do another draft, that's definitely something I would pay close attention to. Anyways, thank you for taking the time to review everyone's stories and provide thoughtful, helpful feedback :)