[@Rtron] [Hider=Ship][img]https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/df1bafaf-df77-4463-8445-c837b6435877/d5s8o48-9d1275d0-69ba-47d4-864d-2016c0f800c0.png?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7InBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcL2RmMWJhZmFmLWRmNzctNDQ2My04NDQ1LWM4MzdiNjQzNTg3N1wvZDVzOG80OC05ZDEyNzVkMC02OWJhLTQ3ZDQtODY0ZC0yMDE2YzBmODAwYzAucG5nIn1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmZpbGUuZG93bmxvYWQiXX0.z-m49gBbR-QBXPtpp3sM7tUZsJFEVlZXsFj0U70v4Zk[/img] [url=https://www.deviantart.com/seeras]Everyone should check out Seeras on Deviantart![/url][/hider] The ship kinda looks something like this though I kinda imagine the weird "wing" parts pulled further back towards the ship itself. In general, I'm kinda envisioning the tight and clutter vibe that something like the Ebon Hawk from the KOTOR games had. In that sense that the [i]Achilles[/i] is a ship designed for deep space travel and has all the gear it would need for such travel. But since it's a small ship you kinda have to work around those constraints. The [i]Normandy[/i] had a medical bay, but the [i]Achilles[/i] probably has something closer to a medical supply closet in terms of size. It's an exercise really in effective space management lol. [@Monochromatic Rainbow] Don't see why cybernetics would be a problem! [@Star Lord] Coolio! I'll take a gander soon and tell you if anything seems fishy! [quote=@Rtron] Heavy WIP but I got started. [hider=Kopris][center][hider=Large Image][img]https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/8634cb94-2875-4d4f-89c3-24f9da881610/daq3moe-50e0c654-4003-4cbe-bf97-a97181d7bb60.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7InBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzg2MzRjYjk0LTI4NzUtNGQ0Zi04OWMzLTI0ZjlkYTg4MTYxMFwvZGFxM21vZS01MGUwYzY1NC00MDAzLTRjYmUtYmY5Ny1hOTcxODFkN2JiNjAuanBnIn1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmZpbGUuZG93bmxvYWQiXX0.HCheASdx55KI4kySCan5d5Xxm9qDtHAjjgj_FoOVFts[/img][/hider] [color=dadada][sub][color=BABABA]K O P R I S C A N ' S O B A R[/color] [color=BABABA]⟁[/color] 40 [color=BABABA]⟁[/color] Male [color=BABABA]⟁[/color] Batarian [color=BABABA]⟁[/color] Vanguard [/sub][/color][/center] [color=BABABA][sub]A P P E A R A N C E[/sub][/color][hr][indent][color=dadada] Kopris Can'sobar looks like he always expects a fight. His scarred face is in what appears to be a permanent scowl and glare, twisting the gnarled mass of scar tissue around his missing top right eye (the eyeball itself replaced with a simple black marble) even more than it would be normally. His surprisingly powerful (for his age) frame always slightly tensed, wide shoulders slightly hunched, as if ready to react in a second. He's normally in dark clothing with an eye for function rather than comfort. Combat boots, fatigues, and a t-shirt. A habit he picked up from his time in the Hegemony's military as a surgeon and medic, when there was never any time to clean of bloodstains and he had to be ready to move in a moments notice. [/color][/indent] [color=BABABA][sub]B A C K G R O U N D[/sub][/color][hr][indent][color=dadada]A detailed and accurate history and upbringing of your character from childhood to now. This is the [i]most[/i] important part of your sheet; helping me determine your writing ability and dedication to wanting to be in this RP. In short if you give a two paragraph summation of John or Linda's entire life then don't expect to get very far here. This also helps you, because the more you write a nice detailed history for your character, the better you get to understand them as a person.[/color][/indent] [color=BABABA][sub]S K I L L S[/sub][/color][hr][indent][color=dadada]Generally what does your character bring to the table. What are they good at? What do they specialize in? Specific jobs, skills, experience and stuff like that. Think of it almost like making a tiny cover letter for your character.[/color][/indent] [color=BABABA][sub]E Q U I P M E N T[/sub][/color][hr][indent][color=dadada]M-15 Vindicator, Blood Pack Punisher, Heavy Skirmisher Armor.[/color][/indent] [color=BABABA][sub]A B I L I T I E S [/sub][/color][hr][indent][color=dadada] -Lash -Biotic Focus -Backlash -Ballistic Blades [/color][/indent] [color=BABABA][sub]PSYCH PROFILE[/sub][/color] [color=BABABA][sub]T R A I T S [/sub][/color][hr][indent][color=dadada]Instead of doing a traditional personality section, I’m doing something a bit different. I’m looking for broadstroke ideas here, so on that note please list three positive and three negative traits below [/color][/indent] [color=BABABA][sub]V I C E S[/sub][/color][hr][indent][color=dadada]Everybody has their guilty pleasures, the thing that they do to cool down and clear their head. For some people that is getting into a fight, for other people its drinking, and others its gambling. List at least one vice for your character and how they came to it.[/color][/indent] [color=BABABA][sub]H A U N T[/sub][/color][hr][indent][color=dadada]Kopris can almost always be found in the [i]Achilles'[/i] Medbay, prepping for the next time it might be needed, taking stock of supplies, drinking from his personal stock of liqour, cleaning his equipment (both in the medbay and for combat), or simply relaxing and surfing the extranet on his omni-tool. The Medbay itself is dishearteningly small. If anyone was looking for the reassuring gleam of high-tech surgery equipment and a large room for whenever they need it, they are going to be disappointed. There's a table for operations, cabinets and dressers along the walls for medical supplies and equipment, and not much else. Upon first seeing it, Kopris only gave a disdainful snort. "Good thing I brought my own supplies." [/color] [/indent] [color=BABABA][sub]D R I V E[/sub][/color][hr][indent][color=dadada]Everyone has something keeping their personal fire going. Everyone has something that motivates them. Be it some deep held grudge, a childhood dream, or even just pure spite. What drives your character forward? [/color][/indent][/hider][/quote] Ah, I see no potential personal problems that may arise from having a Batarian onboard a ship run by an ex-Alliance marine that fought in the Blitz. None at all lol. [@Jarl Coolgruuf] All the secrets belong to me!!! For now at least.... [@Heat] :sun That's understandable! Hopefully we will still be here lol