[quote=@Ceta de Cloyes]
[@Hound55]

Woof! The personality! The characterization! That was a really good post, very pleasant to read ;P The characters felt very distinct and alive, and the jumps in time were very smooth and easy to follow, very nice!
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Thanks, I was a bit worried when I skimmed back through it.  It seemed to come out a bit clunkier than I wanted, but glad people were still able to follow and enjoy it.