[quote=@Dervish] This is always a good rule of thumb. Be like Dervish. Love Dervish. Worship Dervish. Build temples to Dervish. Start a doomsday cult to Dervish. [i][b][h2]DERVISH[/h2][/b][/i] [/quote] Y'know my mother always did say that if you spent too much time on the internet, you'd end up in a cult.... Also update time. Practice reviews are in the works for those I owe them to. They take a little bit of time because I honestly really wanna do the best I can to help you guys. And I can't always be in that super critical, what can we do to make this concept better mindset for too long or else I'll get burned out. So please bare with me with any delays! ^_^ Besides that, I'm going to have another CS up soon as well to give guys another sample of what I'm looking for. You won't meet them for a little bit, till after some intro stuff, but I couldn't help but share them with you guys because like I just love the idea and the character a lot. Like I love what Kolya turned out to be so much that I promoted him from GM-NPC to a #realboi, but this character though is the one I originally had in mind for this. Their story just ends up working better if they are introduced later so in the terminology of Bob Ross it ended up being a happy little accident that worked out with the general story structure. Also they aren't a human... so like that's cool! ^<^