[@Xanadu] Thank you for the prompt and through review! I'm surprised it didn't have more points of contention, but I'm glad you enjoyed the character! The bits you suggested I expand upon make a lot of sense, and a lot of that is my bad for failing to consider that I didn't explain or justify a few key points that are rattling around in my skullcase rather than being on the sheet, which was rather near-sighted of me. To explain some of the bio parts a bit better (that I am gonna edit in, dontcha worry!); -Ardan's wife was more or less a gold digger who thought he was more affluent and successful than he actually was. She kept the ruse up for several months, never feeling anything for him other than he was a guillible client. When she realized the promised big score was never going to happen, she made her move to clear him out when he was out at a job. Being on Omega, I don't imagine drive thru weddings are legally binding. -Ardan's desertion I envisioned as being very low-key and not realized until he was out of Citadel space. He made his travel arrangements on leave, so by the time he booked transit out to the Terminus, he'd more or less disappeared and was out of reach. -I was actually planning on fleshing out his relationship with Casius over the RP; I mainly wanted to introduce the idea they kept in touch. I'll expand upon it in the sheet! -Thanks for letting me know that teal is hard to read on your screen! It seems okay on mine, I was mainly using it for headers; I won't be colouring dialog, however. Thanks again! I'll have that all ironed out soonish!