[quote=@Lmpkio]
The first post is finally up! This is currently the prelude to introduce your monsters and characters into the spotlight. 

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Is there anything I need to change to make things acceptable? aside from actually filling out some history info of course. 
I unfortunately woke up to being stuck with a job for a few hours, but once I'm free today I'm going to be doing that anyway, and figured I should see if there's any other problems I need to fix while I'm at it.