Thanks for the input :D lemme read it! [quote=@MsMorningstar] Hey Shoryu! So, as for your characters, I was going to wait until we got the history to add my input but I'm not sure when that'll come in so I'll just tell you what I'm seeing now. As far as Grinder goes, I really like the concept but there a just a few issues. [list][*]He's very large, 140 meters when not hunched over is a bit much. 100 meters when standing straight would be more appropriate. [*]Mineral Shaping is fine as far as when the crystals are on his body, however flinging them through the air and shaping them seems pretty unrealistic. If he could just shape them on his body to become sharp armor that may make more sense. [*]If you're still looking for a long range attack, you could extend the range of the beam he has. Also, an explanation on how he varies the beam's power could be a great addition.[/list] [/quote] -Large was my idea for him XD and I saw something that said the upper limit was around 150 or so, and in terms of over-all mass there's a couple other monsters around here that are much bigger despite being technically shorter, or at least one I saw, since he's 'mostly' vertical with less length involved, though I 'could' still knock some off. -I can remove the 'disconnected' shaping, sure, and restrict it to 'connected' shaping or 'only while in contact' at least. ^.^ -If removing ranged mineral shaping is involved, I could easily increase the range of the beam, And I was trying to expand the explanation compared to what i originally had, but I can go a little farther, sure. [quote] As far as Gaia is concerned, I only have one small issue: [list][*]So, for the shaping of its body, making a shield or blade out of the metal coating doesn't make as much sense as the other attributes you included for the shaping. Making spikes form all over its frame, or upping the durability of the parts it uses to stomp/beat the other kaijus could be a good alternative.[/list] That's all I've got to add! [/quote] -that's a good suggestion actually, I'll give that one a roll ^.^ Edit: Changes made! I can tweak the height too if that's still an issue after my explanation Also, unfortunately, I also don't know when I'll manage the histories... I may have to settle for leaving them 'mysterious' until I can work up the mind-set for backstory... I can do 'here and now' easy enough right now, but with frequently being interupted to help with hospice care in the house, It's hard to maintain a mood for actual 'backstory' planning for them TxT