[quote=@Shiva]
[@The Fated Fallen] It looks pretty good except for just a couple minor things. The first of which being there wouldn't have been any tours to Earth
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D'oh!

[quote=@Shiva]
The second is you forgot a theme song. I know it's a pain, but if you get the right one it can tell a lot about your character's values. Also you can then imagine that song playing whenever he walks into a room.
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Coming up with theme songs isn't really my strength, but I'll give it a go!