[@Xanadu] Ardan's worked over and up to code! I made sure to go over the bits you felt needed a bit more explanation and expanded on them a bit more, including why he went the enlisted route rather than pursue a career as an officer, reasons why his marriage collapsed, his relationship with his family, and how he yeeted himself out of Council space.

For ease of access, here we are; https://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/4899871