[quote=@Ceta de Cloyes] Yuuughgg I'm stuck on this post, I wrote it out and then it was just something very bland and summarized and time skippy and theres no dialogue it's awful and I have to rewrite ;(, but since I wrote so much in this awkward summary type style its going to take ten bajillion years to decompress it lmao When I eventually do post tho, its going to be soooo looooong [/quote] You could try transitioning between the tighter dialogue-driven scenes and wider narratives. That's what I did with my early Namor posts when I was still fleshing out Atlantis.