[@Indra] Hey ! That Quirk sure seems original, but I have many problems and confusion about it. First: Spices have nothing to do with [i]actual[/i] Heat, so while I understand the idea behind pairing the two for style, some of the things you wrote makes little sense. To me, he's just another Fire Quirk, but with blue flames. Everything Spice related makes little to no sense, and the MHA universe powers, or Quirks, are built around the fact that they basically have to make logical sense. Furthermore, keepîng in mind that at this point his Quirk is basically just any other Fire Quirk, I also have problems with the moves. Producing Fire or Electricity is a thing but shaping and using it is another. I rewathced Endeavor's fight scene, and he does shape it into balls that he shoots or, at one point, a sort of Javelin - my guess is that it takes load of training to learn to master a Quirk to this level. And he's world wide 2nd Best Hero. The one Move where you are cloaked In flames seems OK, but the two others are way too advanced for a student. He may learn it as the story goes forward, but it takes time to master a Quirk. Even more than that, the Sample Post is too little too few. I am not talking in terms of length, of which I do not care, but the Quality isn't there. It feels as if it's written Hastily, and it tries to skip over some information which should be described more deeply. It lacks something, and it's not high quality enough that I could accept it as it is ! You can Edit it all, if you wish it, then poke me that I can take a second look at it.