Please keep all text in first person (third person may be used for action text) . When you write action text keep it in original format, however use colored text when your character is speaking. Please only use the same color for your character for every post you make. 

Ex/
Moving towards the water fall. [color=fff200]"I wonder how tall it really is."[/color] He stares up at the huge waterfall. [color=fff200]"I'll bet it is 500 feet in height."[/color] Eventually, backing away and continuing the hike.