[quote=@Ceta de Cloyes]
Well, this critique stuff is new and exciting! I’m slightly too terrified to ask for a review of my own though lmao
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You can always ask for a private one if you want. I promise I don't bite. 

But, I think healthy critiquing, when requested, can only serve to help us as writers and RPers moving forward. Which subsequently aids the game in thriving. Besides, this is clearly just a marketing ploy to convince more people to review my own posts. 

[sub][sub]Also, Nate was slacking on his reviewing duties.[/sub][/sub]