[@Pudding] Right off the bat we have a problem; the Sample Post is obligatory. Sample Post is not Bio, Sample Post is a way for me to know if I accept you or not ! 

You don't have to write about your character's past. Hell, you don't even need to write about your character, but I included it in it because that is usually what everyone does. In the end, though, I need a Sample Post. 

I read the rest real Quick and I probably would need to talk about it with my Co-GM, but to me it doesn't seem like anything else is extremely out of place. 

P.S: [@Indra] [@Pudding] I have to mention that I am ready to accept only one final player as Hero. Which ever one of you edits first and is accepted can join. It's worth to mention that I [i]might[/i] need a new villain soon-ish though, but that is not yet certain.