[@Abefroeman] 

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House Tully is acceptable for the characters tab, you may revise any spelling/grammatical mistakes and characterizations you choose to.
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[@Stormborn]

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Your conceptualization seems fine, though some detail could be added in revision. Since you have mentioned to me you’d like to revise some things, let me know when you’ve completed such revisions. Currently, I find it acceptable though I do find it odd that Elia Dayne is a Sword of the Morning at age twenty. I’d ask you to justify how she earned such title since the implications of it being a difficult title to earn do exist in lore through the actions of Ulrick and Arthur Dayne.
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[@Danvers]

[hider=Review Commentary]We still have to work out your [b][i]green dreams[/i][/b] plotline, but it appears your sheet is completed. I approve of it and it may be moved to the characters tab. Feel free to add your POVs and Realm Relations as needed after-the-fact.
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[@Sadko]

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This appears fine as well. Feel free to edit any [appropriate] edits as needed, but do feel free to move it to the characters tab.
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