[quote=@RisingSun] ... [/quote] Sheet Feedback: I find there's some contradiction in his character, but I can't quite put my finger on it. Maybe because you point out that he isn't the most honourable of men, whilst saying that he stays true to friends and allies. To me that seems to entail an honourable personality. Also, 'pride' not 'proudness' (while the latter exists apparently, it really is uncommon). Finally, I advise you to add in some weakness(es), and relations. Quirks are also always a nice thing. These will make Matthos a more interesting, rounded out character.