[quote=@RisingSun] Ok there we go. It should all be the right name now [/quote] I appreciate the efforts you've taken so far. The weakness you list is one that regards his house and situtation. While I believe it is a correct assessment regarding the times, it does not relate to him as a character. Where are the flaws in his personality? Right now he's a Gary Stu. Were you planning on adding more House members?