[@Tenma Tendo][@ShwiggityShwah]

Both accepted! Feel free to move them over to the characters tab.

[@JrVader]

Okay, a few notes here before acceptance. For starters, the picture is broken, which I think you noticed - this is because Pintrest is a garbage website that doesn't want to be used. A quick search suggests that [url=http://oakthorne.net/wiki/images/Sir-odanis.jpg]this[/url] might be an alternate url for the same image that wouldn't have that problem, so, there you go. Second, also a minor note, I need to know what the mark actually looks like. Third, like I said in the OOC, I'm not a massive stickler about grammar but there is a standard, so I'm going to have to ask you to fix some of the cases of missing punctuation and extra adverbs stuff - if you want to PM me about that, I am 100% available and happy to help and discuss it with you. Fourth, minor note and this isn't your fault at all, just a side effect of me posting the character sheet before some information came out in the OOC, calling it 'Heaven' is a little on the nose for the tone of this RP - if you wanted it to be, like, 'Aetheria' or some other fantasy word that was basically the celestial kingdom of a certain divinity with angels and all of that, that would be 100% cool. Last but not least, I'd like to see a slight expansion in terms of his personality - I think he's emerging pretty well as an awkward, sort of sheltered kind of character, but I think we could do more with questions like what he values, what he believes in, how he relates to his heritage - he seems proud, does that ever become arrogance? He's a romantic, but how does that play into his sheltered life? What does he think of the realities of the world? And so on.

I do like the character - I think he's very sweet. If you want to discuss any of this, feel free to PM me.


[@Saltwater Thief]

Yes, apologies if that wasn't clear, PCs will be matched with each other - if worst comes to worst and we just have an odd number no matter what, I'll make an extra character so that everyone gets a partner.

Speaking of, I need to get to work on my first character.