Name: Leon Tolandson 
Race : human 
Gender: male 
Age: 22
Appearance: armored- Leon wears plate boots with flexible leather for the rest as he cannot afford more plate armor unarmored - Leon has blond hair of medium length that gets in his eyes because of that he usually wears it to the side he has hazel eyes with more brown then green he is 5'5 and his spear is unadorned and plain
Personality: Leon is a fairly peaceful person until his friends or someone he cares about it hurt he likes to read he is worried that he will not be able to successfully serve the knights and works in bettering his skills he likes to learn different languages so he can come off as more inviting when talking to someone for  leads he is neither shy nor hold  but likes to take the middle approach he is carefree and joking when he is not in combat but when he engages in battle he is serious and grim as he doesn't enjoy war itself but joined the knights to protect the kingdom 
Backstory: Leon was born to a fairly wealthy family on the outskirts of the kingdom as a boy his father's tutors trained him in reading, writing and language's His father then trained him in the art of war he became proficient enough with the spear that he could hold his own in a fight after that his father shipped away to the inland and he hasn't seen him since
Equipment: Leon uses plate armor boots leather armor and a spear 
Skills: Leon is proficient with the spear and knows multiple languages  
Would this be an acceptable character instead