[@dragonpiece] Overall I must admit I do very much like it, though there are a few points that caught my attention; -You used "fuck them self" instead of "fuck themselves" or "fuck itself" and there's a few minor errors of similar nature. Not too important, but thought I'd mention. -The image has pointy ears, however elves would not really be a thing in this setting. Since you don't mention them anywhere though, I assume he's not actually supposed to be an elf? -The war started a decade ago, so if your character is 25, he'd have been 15 when it began. -I don't believe that there realistically is any reason why eggs would be vibrantly colored like they are in the series. Still, there's plenty of ways to figure out it would be a Bagon egg in a Salamence's nest, so that too is mostly detail work. I think it'd be fine to leave the first two as they are, but I'd appreciate it if you could make the changes to accomodate the last two points. Still, overall it looks like a fine sheet.