1st Edit- Fail 2nd Edit - Fail [center] [img]https://i.imgur.com/FwCPdYC.jpg[/img] [hider=OoC] [b]How long do you usually write?[/b] Around one to two paragraphs. It depends on how much is going around me, and if I'm interacting with anyone. [b] Do you enjoy writing collaborative posts for things like conversations, combat, etc.? [/b] Yes, if I didn't I would just write a book :P [b] Is grammar and depth of writing important to you? [/b] Grammar is not a big deal as long as I understand what is going on, and I don't know what depth of writing means : ^) #CompSciLife [b] Are there any writing subjects you particularly enjoy exploring? [/b] Character interaction, moral gray areas, the journey of a character over a period of time. [b] Is there anything you [i]really[/i] dislike and want to avoid like the plague? [/b] Displeasing people! Lemme know if something I do is wrong. [b] Is there something you are uncomfortable with happening to your character? [/b] Nope, everything is fair in love and war. [b] Do you have any short-term or long-term goals with this character? [/b] Long-Term: For him to find a group to fit in, and fully immerse himself in whatever order he joins, whether it be Sith or Jedi. [/hider] [hider=Mandalorian Tribal Record] [b] Name: [/b] Ga-Se-Gar [b] Species: [/b] Tiss'Shar, Orl-ar subrace [b] Age: [/b] 14 Standard years [b] Gender: [/b] Male [b] Clan: [/b] Madog [b] Specialization: [/b] Blaster Rifles, Vibroswords, Weapon Modifications [b] Planet of origin: [/b] Dxun [b] Current area of operation: [/b] ??? [/hider] [hider=Mandalorian Clan Record] [h3][sub]Detailed description of the warrior.[/sub][/h3] At the taller end of the Tiss'Shar side of biology, Ga-Se-Gar stands at 5'10" and 370lbs. His muscular frame allows him to perform impressive athletic feats, such as leaping great lengths that the Orl-ar Tiss'Shar are known for. His Mandalorian armor is jet black, with little modifications, to help him remain hidden. This choice was made the clan leader, Grim, who thought that once he mastered his powers of battle meditation, it would be best for him to remain hidden as much as possible. He keeps his modified blaster rifle strapped to his back and a beskad sheathed on his right hip. Underneath his armor he has green scales and yellow stripes that run down from the front of his snout to the back of his tail. His body is usually bruised. These bruises tend to have several origins, whether that be from hunting jungle predators, fighting in the battle circles, or various other physically intensive activities that come with the Mandalorian lifestyle on Dxun. Ga-Se-Gar generally doesn't wear clothing while outside of his armor, as he always felt more comfortable without wearing any. Ga-Se-Gar does own a singular article of clothing, a pointed straw hat. He wears will wear it very rarely, such as on special occasions like holidays or other kinds of celebrations. [h3][sub]Report on all relevant skills and talents, including level of skill.[/sub][/h3] As Ga-Se-Gar's time was spent between combat training and trying to hone his force abilities, he developed little to no other skills. He knows a bit about weapon modification, as he has modded out both his blaster rifle and beskad, but this is more of a hobby than a fully developed skilled. [h3][sub]Report on known combat experience, training and weapons training.[/sub][/h3] Ga-Se-Gar excelled in survival and combat training when training with his father, and completed the verd'goten with ease. This is due a to combination of his natural knack for combat and his force abilities, which help him excel as a warrior. His aim with the blaster rifle is immaculate, and he has known to be very versatile with the weapon. Whether it be overwhelming opponents with well placed shots, sniping out high priority targets while under fire, or engaging in a quick draw, if there is any feat that can be done with a blaster rifle, Ga-Se-Gar has already probably mastered it. Ga-Se-Gar also frequents the Battle Circle, and has proven his worth with a beksad on more than one occasion. While only considered adequate on with his swordsmanship alone, Ga-Se-Gar's becomes a force to be reckoned with while using force speed. While forbidden in official battle circle combat, veterans have been known to spar with Ga-Se-Gar using force speed in preparation for upcoming fights. [h3][sub]Report on natural ability with the Force, as well as all known Force Techniques and the skill level.[/sub][/h3] Ga-Se-Gar shows great potential with his force powers, but has received no formal training for his techniques. Ga-Se-Gar's ability to wield the force remain very basic, but all he needs is the appropriate teacher for him to truly excel. [list] [*] Force Sense (Tier I) Through trying to learn through the force himself and having a strong affinity to the force, Ga-Se-Gar is able to sense the general level of power of other force users and places that strongly emanate the force. [*] Force Speed (Tier I) Ga-Se-Gar uses this force technique whenever he sees necessary, whether that be for combat or to get places faster. This helps him move faster on the battlefield, take in his surroundings quicker, and strike more times than possible without use of the force. [*] Force Barrier (Tier I) Ga-Se-Gar has learned this ability more of as a result of him studying the force in general rather than studying this skill in particular. Ga-Se-Gar rarely uses this underdeveloped force technique, but knows how to use it nonetheless. [*] Battle Meditation (Very, very weak) Ga-Se-Gar has show the capability of using Battle Mediation and has been looking on ways to master it. He has scrounged Dxun for any artifacts, Jedi or Sith, to help him learn about Battle Meditation but has had little luck in finding any. Currently, the ability only makes him and his companions "feel lucky" while he is around. [/list] [h3][sub]Detailed notes on known rivals and enemies.[/sub][/h3] Ga-Se-Gar has had made little opportunities to make enemies, as he has spent most of his life on Dxun and with his clan. However, Ga-Se-Gar has made several rivals within the clan walls. While his skills in battle have earned him praise, Ga-Se-Gar cocky and better-than-you attitude has earned him the ire of a few of his brothers. A lot of the lower ranked Mandalorians in the Battle Circle constantly challenge him, hoping to best him in swordplay but end up being crushed. Mandalorians of the same age of Ga-Se-Gar are constantly compared to his far superior skill level, and thus they look for the opportunity to best him in anyway when they get the chance. [h3][sub]List of known belongings, including but not limited to planetary surface property, civilian and military vessels, vehicles, weapons, tools.[/sub][/h3] Ga-Se-Gar owns standard Mandalorian armor that he wears almost all the time. His blaster rifle is modified with a Mark II targeting scope and Mark I broadening chamber he added himself throughout the spare time he has had throughout the years. He keeps a Mandalorian beksad with him, made of the same durable material as his armor. His beksad is equipped with a basic Nagai grip, which is still a very rare and powerful modification. [h3][sub]List and description of known and suspected flaws. To be put into restricted database.[/sub][/h3] Ga-Se-Gar's ego is very inflated. His skills are nothing to be scoffed at, but Ga-Se-Gar has not experienced "real combat." Ga-Se-Gar has run many training courses, fought countless jungle creatures, and also run plenty of mock wars, but he has yet to leave the encampment on Dxun for a real fire fight. [h3][sub]known interests of the warrior.[/sub][/h3] Ga-Se-Gar's goal in life is to master his battle meditation to make Clan Madog the strongest Mandalorian clan in the galaxy. [h3][sub]Major achievements on record.[/sub][/h3] Ga-Se-Gar's only notable achievement is hunting down and killing a Zakkeg by himself, as he has experienced little actual combat. [hider=Biography] [h3][sub]Personal biography, as detailed by the subject for use in Mandalorian archives. Acquired shortly after last achievement of note.[/sub][/h3] Ga-Se-Gar was adopted as an egg by two older Mandalorians, Baid and Theko Pynor, who had already lost children in the Great Galactic War. They had taken the egg whilst out recruiting other Tiss'Shar on Tiss'Sharl.The Tiss'Shar who gave Ga-Se-Gar away had laid one too many eggs in her clutch and was going to leave it for dead before Baid and Theko offered to take care of the child. The mother thanked them for sparing her unborn child's life and had only one request, that the child be named Ga-Se-Gar, meaning "lucky warrior." The couple took the egg and kept it warm until it hatched. Unbeknownst to them, their new [i]ik'aad[/i] had the potential to be one of most crucial member of Mandalorian society for generations to come. Ga-Se-Gar demonstrated his aptitude for the force from a very young age. Early on in his training with his father, he would constantly speed ahead of his father with his force speed. He would corner jungle animals for kills with his force barrier. And his father always felt his aim was slightly better when he was with his son. This lucky feeling was the first sign of Ga-Se-Gar's [i]akaan sur'ar[/i], battle meditation. Ga-Se-Gar did not realize the incredible potential of his battle meditation until he completed his [i]verd'goten[/i] and became an adult. Grim, the leader of clan Madog, told him that his power could be use to turn the tide in wars, and that he should focus on mastering it, as it could be immensely useful for helping him fellow Mandalorians to become unstoppable on the battlefield. Ga-Se-Gar alternates between honing his battle skills and looking for anything to help him to learn to master his battle meditation. Unfortunately for Ga-Se-Gar, his progress in mastering his force abilities has stagnated, even if they were barely progressing before. With no master to teach him, Ga-Se-Gar's seeks out either some sort text he can study or a teacher willing to impart their knowledge of the force onto him. [/hider] [/hider] [hider=IC plans] The end goal is for Ga-Se-Gar to eventually choose a side between the Jedi or Sith. The choosing of the side will be motivated by his desire to learn more about his Battle Meditation, and the fact that if he doesn't choose a side, both will see him as a threat (due to his Battle Meditation capabilities) and would rather have him killed. His desire to learn more about his Battle Meditation stems from his want for Mandalorian clan to become stronger, but I would like for his loyalties to change from the Mandalorians to whatever order he chooses after sometime. This will obviously involve a lot of character interactions and time spent with the order, but as he is still young (while 13 is an adult in Mando, 14 is still young enough to be influenced/in development, in my opinion) and sheltered, I think being exposed to a new way of thinking after developing a close relationship to a master could definitely make this change of mindset possible. 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