[quote]Uses the Obi-wan fighting style.[/quote]
I'd like you to use [url=https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Form_III/Legends]an era-specific term[/url]. Then there are these guides on [url=https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MS5gL0lSwk3pzdf0SnzhgOMWQgPjQPg-UAzYQiZW5iE/edit]Jedi Training and Life[/url], and [url=https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SWteA0cCoOL14LTqkmkALYcy2mRevpiW1KRTJL67xFI/edit]Lightsaber Combat[/url]. Both are strongly suggested reads.

I would furthermore want you to expand and elaborate on your fella's biography, also check typos.

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