Something I wanted to do with my character, a character quirk I was playing with, was having the Trandoshan be raised by a human colony. As such I wrote them to be very human dispite their racial differences. I have a much more detailed prewriten backstory I can send you as I couldn't find a good way to incorporate it in this format. I wrote it that way becasue I thought it would open up a lot of funny rp, like a huge intimiating figure that ultimately is very soft Underneath. I can change race if it's truely a big deal. The other stuff I will definatly change and work on as I wrote this up at like 2:30 am. [@Ellri]