[quote=@Apollosarcher][sub]Alright, so gave it look over I'm fixing up grammar issues. As for why he has three Master's listed. Master Vorlya Sisk is a very recent promotion to Master, I thought about listing her as a Knight still in some of the reports to have that come across but I was unsure if that would sound like I forgetting to keep her rank the same or if the intention would be clear. Master Turus is a very elderly Master and one he reached the position very late in life through wisdom and understanding the force through meditation. Master Sar Dan'ii was a Battlemaster and well-respected teacher on Coruscant who took in promising saber combatants as her student usually.[/sub][/quote] Seems like we may not have gotten across quite right what we intended to get across... We've no problem with him having had multiple masters. If anything, it is likely in this time period for that to be the case, especially if the Jedi spent time in on the field of battle or anywhere else where Sith may have been encountered. The risk of death or serious injuries would naturally have been higher during the war than prior to it, both of which could lead to a padawan being reassigned. Instead, what we wondered about is the unusual circumstance of his having been trained by three different Jedi Masters, yet not having a single report from regular Jedi Knights in his records. Note that there is a difference between a Padawan's master and a Jedi Master. The former means teacher and is an honorific, whereas the latter is a formal title and rank in the Order. [sub](this is covered in more detail in the Jedi Master section of the [i]Jedi Training and Life[/i] guide.)[/sub] In a time of war like this, not only do more Jedi die—not only among those who are mere padawans or knights, but also among the masters—but those who remain are even busier than they would have been prior to the war. [quote=@Apollosarcher][sub]As for his survival of the battle of Coruscant, he and his master were believed dead at first. Airus was found when they moved to search the ruins of the temple in lower sections. They were not at the temple when the attack began instead were heading for the starport instead of returning to the temple they left it his Master believing it would fall. He had and his master had survived in the initial attack, they retreated to the lower levels his Master wanted to organize survivors and strike back. Before they could do anything a single Sith Lord who had pursued them dropped down. Airus's Master had already been wounded so he disobeyed her choosing to stand at her side rather than go try to find others. Airus was thrown aside into a pile of stone rubble, his master killed by this Sith while he lay injured and unable to move. I was thinking the details of his survival would be something kept rather secret.[/sub][/quote] When a Sith believe an opponent dead, it is because the opponent has been dismantled or has had organs vital to survival permanently disabled, such as decapitation, spine (or body) severed above a certain point of the torso, and so forth. The Sith were intent upon wiping out any Jedi they could find on Coruscant and as such a key part of their assault involved isolating the Jedi Temple. To not be caught by the Sith surprise attack, any Jedi would have had to be far from the temple during the initial assault, or distant enough not not simply be killed by the bombardment. As for their being pursued from the temple... A Sith Lord would not have pursued them alone. He or she would have brought a significant force of troopers and possibly multiple apprentices. When such Sith eventually caught up to the Jedi, the goal would have been capture or kill. Airus wouldn't merely have been left in a pile of rubble after being disabled. If salvagable, he would have been taken captive. If not judged worth taking captive, he would have been executed. Possibly in a very painful manner. [quote=@Apollosarcher][sub]As for his age. Well, he joined the order at age two, served as initiate until twelve he was originally slated to has his promotion at twenty after the battle of Coruscant they delayed that and served further as a Padawan until age twenty-two under a different Master. So he served as Knight for six years currently. Either way, I'm working on edits now. Hope this isn't too much.[/sub][/quote] Joining the Order at the age of two is perfectly normal. He'd probably have been an initiate until around 12-14, then a padawan until 18-22. Since you picked him becoming a padawan at twelve years old, he'd have a normal but medium-long padawan period if he passed the trials at 22. You could use his not succeeding at all of them in the years leading up to this perhaps? Born: 3675 (age 0) Initiate: 3673 (age 2) Padawan: 3663 (age 12) Knight: 3653 (age 22) <-- This is also the year of the Sacking of Coruscant Present day: 3647 (age 28) as you can see, your bit above seems to indicate you thinking the sacking occurred two years earlier than it did.