hello. can u pls review this? i worked very hard on it. pls give me feedback. i feel like this would be an epic character for this RP. [hider=The Pet Who Sold the World....] [center][img]https://i.imgur.com/B6iVSKf.jpg[/img][/center] [hr] [center][b][h3]Orange Fillet[/h3][/b][/center] [i][center][b]A Fish Who Swam Upstream[/b][/center][/i] [hr] Secret Name : Carassius auratus Code Name : Orange Fillet Age: 80 [u]Personality[/u] - Silent - Deadly - A Lust for Revenge - Focused on the Mission - A Pet Patriot Experience: 80 years [u]Day-Job[/u] A Pet Goldfish [u][b]Abilities[/b][/u] [u]Skills[/u] Fillet prominently uses PQP (Pet Quarters Pugilism) to dispatch of his foes, a combined combat technique synthesized from every known animal based martial art in existence: Slothjutsu, Eel Chi, Batrate, Anacombo and Snaildoo. Fillet is an expert marksfish as well, splashing and spitting water with eerie accuracy. Lastly but not least, Fillet is a master of covert stealth operations. Because he's a fish. And no one would expect a spy to be a fish. [u]Powers[/u] Fillet is the perfect genetic clone of the Carp Colonel, considered by many to be the most legendary soldier in the entire world. He has the proportional strength of 10 dogs within his tiny flippers. He can swim faster than a motor boat, survive in saltwater and sewer water for extended periods of time. Finally, his IQ of 250 and mastery of all foreign human and pet languages makes him an unmatched lateral thinker. Fillet has also been injected with nano-sized sea monkeys that enhance and regulate his bodies abilities, allowing him to interface with any human technology such as the humble blender. [u]Weaknesses[/u] Despite being the greatest spy in the world, Fillet is still a goldfish and thus can die if his owner overfeeds him, does not change the water in his tank 2 times a day, puts him under stress when transporting him or overcrowding his tank with other fish. [u]Arrowcaster Discovery[/u] Orange Fillet discovered Arrowcaster after being bought by him, masquerading in a pet shop as a cheap goldfish who was advertised to have a lifespan of only one month. [u]Biography[/u] A product of the Los Mascotas Terrible, Fillet was one of the many clones of world renowned fish soldier, Carp Colonel. Raised from a young age in his tank to join C-World, a special forces pet paegent unit dedicated to stopping the proliferation of pets in meme battles, Golden Fillet was tasked with stopping the threat of organisations such as PETA, Greenpeace and WWF from 1928 to 1995. The famous of his missions was a black-ops operation that revealed Pixar was purposefully misinforming children that flushing their pets down the toliet would return them to the ocean. However, children and parents alike were unaware that the film was used as a means of powering up a ancient cult memematurgic ritual through mass sacrifice of fish to summon the great Cathullu, a supernatural entity of devastating power. The battle between Fillet and Pixar would be known as the 'Little Nemo' War. This conflict of proxy meme pets would culminate in Golden Fillet battling his evil clone brother, Fillet O'Fish, who had possessed his old comrade, Purpose Pidgeon, via hypnotherapy to make the bird believe that he, Purpose Pidgeon, a bird, was a fish. Then, Fillet O'Fish drowned trying to fight Fillet because birds can't breathe underwater. Following the 'Little Nemo' incident and subsequent smear campaign by PETA, who had used the distraction of Pixar and its anthromorphic animal memes to seize power, Golden Fillet was declared a rogue bioweapon by the U.S Government. He faked his death during the Gulf Oil Spill but re-emerged years later in the guise of Orange Fillet, no longer bearing the lustrous gold scales he once had in his youth. Now, with the threat of PETA using pets for proxy meme battles in America, Fillet aims to join Arrowcaster's team to create a meme of his own that will pass down for generations. A meme that will hopefully counteract PETA's memes that they are trying to subvert the global population with. [u]Sample Post[/u] [center][i] Pets have changed. It's no longer about being cute, patting animals or emotional support. They're memes, part of the endless series of battles, bought by wizards and mercenaries. Pets - and their consumption of memes - has become a well-oiled animal shelter. Pets have changed. ID-tagged owners used ID-tagged pets, used ID-tagged pet food. Sea-Monkeys inside their bodies enhance and regulate their abilities. Genetic control, information control, emotion control, snack control....everything is collared and kept under control. The age of deterrence has become the age of control, all in the name of averting cat-astrophe from pets of mass destruction and he who controls the pet shop, controls history. Pets have changed. When the pet shop is under total control, pets become routine. [/i][/center] Fillet watched from his fish-bowl, mouth open and never closing, as Arrowcaster paid 1 dirty dollar for him over the counter. He was silent as Arrowcaster carried him outside towards the door. A tabby cat, being hugged to death by a little human girl, whispered to him words of respect that Fillet knew could only come from the pet that had garnered so much memes online. " Let the legend come back to life again." This cat - no, this cat meme - could have been him once. The door-bell jingled. He felt the taste of freedom as Arrowcaster held him, swaying side from side in the warm water. There was a car screech, the sudden feeling of weightlessness. His plastic bowl burst on the sidewalk upon impact and there he was, flopping on the ground, left out to dry by Arrowcaster. His eyes found the source of the disturbance. A food truck had just crashed into the pet shop, an eagle-costumed man clambering out of the driver's seat with a sack full of tacos as he ran out, screaming ' AMMMMERERRIIICCCAAAAA" onto the busy traffic intersection. This man had the meme of a country in the DNA of his soul. Fillet needed to obtain the power of memes if he needed to defeat PETA. [/hider]