[quote=@Rune_Alchemist] [hider=Chidori] [center][h3][color=8493ca][b]Kaji Chidori[/b][/color][/h3] [img]https://i.imgur.com/v9Y5lnl.jpg [/img] [b]Age:[/b] 17 [b]Personality:[/b] Kind of a klutzy wallflower. Chidori easily blends into the background of places, not having very much of a presence, especially when compared to her constant companion who easily overshadows her in both terms of beauty and general presence. She absolutely loathes being the center of the attention, wanting nothing more than to not stand out in any significant way. When around others, she tries her best to be cheery, to let herself try and actually make friends, but her clumsiness and pervasive sense of self doubt is utterly detrimental to any sort of social ability. Stumbles over words, doesn't like arguing and tends to choose the path of least resistance when doing things. Despite all this however, Chidori is blessed with an acute mind - vastly intelligent and easily outshines most other people her age. While she isn't quite a prodigy, she has poured her heart and soul into studying the sciences and Constructs and will easily, if given the chance, talk your ear off about nuclear power, hover boards and her general love of constructs in general. [b]Background:[/b] Born and raised in the Shinchi region by a fairly normal somewhat well off family, Chidori didn't have what one might call a happy upbringing. Her parents gave her plenty of love. Plenty of support growing up, and couldn't have asked for a better child. Her parents were the owners of a rather well off construction company and from an early age she was expected to pick up the mantle. Yet, that was something she never wanted. When she was old enough, she expressed her interest in the sciences to her parents. Of course, doing something like that when they considered the family company far more important was simply absurd to them. So the fights started. Chidori tried to ignore it, and focus on her own studies into the more academic fields. Sciences, atomic energy, constructs...but she could never shake the feeling she was in the wrong. She was the one who messed up. It wasn't exactly bad, was it? but...she couldn't do something like run a company. Her parents constantly pressuring her wasn't helpful. She wasn't cut out for it, she knew that much. And school wasn't much better - constant harassment and bullying in the typical fashion. Her clumsiness didn't help and made her an easy target for some of the less nicely inclined kids. Finally having enough of it all, she decided she'd do something about it. She made herself a construct and applied to the Geiru institute. Making it in secret was no easy task, but she managed to without her parents finding out about it. When everything was said and done, a creature with an almost ethereal grace stood before her, and simply said. [color=fff79a]"...to timid to sing yourself, are you? Very well - I'll sing for both of us until you find your voice."[/color] [b]Magic:[/b] Chidori's magic focuses heavily on creating and manipulating an objects gravity, mostly focusing on her own, personal gravity so she can float, fly, fling herself at high speeds in a direction, create fields of denser or lesser gravity, and creating 'gravity wells' that cause anything around them to be drawn towards it. Strength varies, and stronger and larger wells are rather tiring. [/center] [/hider] [hider=Song Bird] [center] [b]Name:[/b] [h3]Nehla[/h3] [img]https://i.pinimg.com/564x/7f/83/78/7f8378ac8e048afe12caeb75fecbb854.jpg[/img] [b]Type:[/b] Humanoid [b]Personality:[/b] Perhaps where Chidori doesn't quite so like herself, that's why Nehla was created with something she doesn't want to quite admit she has. That is faith in oneself. ...though it manifested in a slightly antagonistic tendency. Nehla is a rather forceful, cold individual. Proud, confident in her abilities, and utterly disregards most everything unless it is of a direct interest to her. While she is typically civil and polite in her mannerisms, the only human she seems to ever get along with in some degree is Chidori. [b]Core:[/b] Faith [b]Abilities:[/b] A construct with the ability to manipulate Sound Waves. That is, the pressure waves which make up the phenomena known as 'sound'. A versatile and deadly tool if used correctly. By releasing such waves into the ground, one could cause large scale earthquakes. By generating an uninterrupted low-frequency pressure wave, it could prove fatal to living beings by causing internal bleeding, whilst high frequencies can be used as a Sonar like effect. In a less massive scale, the pressure waves can be used to knock back foes, generate 'shields' of pressure waves around an area, and other such applications. Quite agile, and she is able to fly. [/center] [/hider] Heyo, here we go. [/quote] So I thought I recognized that girl, and I was right. It's [url=https://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=6604936]Hoodier's[/url] girl! Obscure source hunting aside, I'm about 90% okay with this. I need a few clarifications before I can feel entirely comfortable accepting you, though. 1: While it's technically possible to earn a scholarship through an institute like Geiru and transition back to a normal, higher education if you take some competency tests, it still seems like a weird choice to me. It doesn't look like Chidori is particularly interested in protecting the nation and it's not like the institute itself will delve particularly deep into science, which is her forte. Could you explain this a bit more? 2: Nehla's power is a bit too vague for me, and doesn't seem to match up too well with her visual design. A friend of mine suggested you might be going for a "siren" angle since the one line of hers mentioned singing, but if that's the case, how does she release shockwaves into the earth? Face-plant and yell into the ground? There needs to be some more explanation on *how* her powers work, I feel, not just what effect they could have. Give me some more of that and I'll prolly be fine with this, most of this seems alright to me.