Heya! This is my character. Please tell me if there's anything I should change about her. Hope ya like her! ^u^ [hider=Helena Brighthart] [center][h3][color=#E18BB7]Basic[/color] [color=#4362BD]Information[/color][/h3][/center] [color=#E18BB7][u][b]Name[/b][/u][/color] Princess Helena Brighthart [color=#4362BD][u][b]Age[/b][/u][/color] 17 [color=#E18BB7][u][b]Gender[/b][/u][/color] Female [color=#4362BD][u][b]Ethnicity[/b][/u][/color] England [color=#E18BB7][u][b]Nationality[/b][/u][/color] European [color=#4362BD][u][b]Species[/b][/u][/color] Carbuncle [hr] [center][color=#E18BB7][h3]Detailed Information[/h3][/color][/center] [color=#4362BD][u][b]Appearance[/b][/u][/color] [hider=Human Form] Helena has long, pink hair that can reach down at her feet, with blue hues at the end. She keeps some strands of her hair in braids, but lets most of it just loose. Her eyes are a mix of pink and blue, though they do seem violet when viewed at a distance. She will always wear puffy dresses whenever she is in her castle; outside, she makes sure to wear casual clothing that lets her run and skip and hop with ease and comfort. When given the chance, she will always pick looking casual than looking formal. Lastly, her bangs cover up the pink crystal on her forehead. [center][img]https://www.wallpapermaiden.com/image/2016/08/25/vocaloid-ia-profile-view-anime-4924-resized.png[/img][/center][/hider] [hider=Carbuncle Form] She looks like a mix of a squirrel, fox, and a cat with furry whiskers and a puffy tail. Her bluish white fur is colored with strands of pink and dark blue. In this form, her crystal juts out more and looks more like a horn that she can also use to fight against enemies. She wears a golden necklace bearing the symbol of her family with blue ribbons attached to its chain. Though she may be shorter in this form, Helena is more nimble than ever. [center][img]https://sv.bagoum.com/getRawImage/0/0/111141010[/img][/center][/hider] [color=#E18BB7][u][b]Personality[/b][/u][/color] Helena has always lived a sheltered life ever since she was a young one. She longed of the day she could explore the world outside of their kingdom, to know what it's like living beyond the place she grew up in. She would often read books that came from the outside world, as she thought of these books as her windows to at least get a glimpse of the beyond. She's an adventurer at heart, but she was bound to her duty as a princess, and the protectiveness of her parents grew tenfold as she was their only daughter in their children of three. Even if she had a wealthy upbringing, Helena was beloved by her people not only for her beauty but also for her golden heart. [color=#4362BD][u][b]Notable Relations[/b][/u][/color] King Harold Brighthart - ruler of the Kingdom of Clartellus; her father Queen Gloriana Brighthart - wife of the king; her mother Prince Rachfort Brighthart - first-born prince, heir to the throne; her eldest brother Prince Valor Brighthart - second-born prince, middle child; her elder brother General Fiona Springrain - commander of the kingdom's army; Glorianna's elder sister, Helena's aunt [color=#E18BB7][u][b]Everyday Skills[/b][/u][/color] [list][*]Arts [*]Playing musical instruments [*]Singing [*]Reads books fast and is knowledgeable about stuff[/list] [color=#4362BD][u][b]Biography[/b][/u][/color] There is not much to know about carbuncles, and their kind intends to keep it that way. Ever since humans first saw the crystal shining like a star on their forehead, more often than not that these humans will chase after it and claim it as their own. Carbuncles lost some of their fellow kind to the greedy humans, and in retaliation they sway them with the beauty of their glowing crystal and lead them to an early grave, the cost of their greed. They are reported to been along the south of the Americas, yet their true home is in England. There, they have lived in peace and prosperity for centuries, away from the sinful hearts of humans. As of now, the carbuncles live in a forest full of mystics and magics in a kingdom called Clartellus, where crystals and precious gems grow amidst the tallest trees and shine as bright as the stars in the heavens. Large fortresses made of crystal and stone serve as the walls of the kingdom as the Veil prevents it to be seen by humans, as any who perceive it will think that there would only be trees and grass there. Only a few of their kind are allowed to leave the kingdom beyond the Veil, only to return with news of the outside world to keep their rulers up to date on what is happening outside. They are fine in living under their earth for all of eternity, but it was Helena who advised her father the King that it was time for them to venture out into the open, that they do not have to live in fear anymore. The King was fully against it, thinking that it would violate the very reason why they have been alive for so long. His Queen supported Helena's idea, saying that if they will forever be lost in the sands of time should they not value the essence of change. The King agreed but only if Helena will enroll at an academy called Nox Tenebrae, a school that teaches its students to protect the world of creatures like the carbuncles to be seen by humans. He knew of how much Helena craved to see the world and he figured enrolling her in the academy will have her dream come true. He also knew that the academy will teach her how to defend herself and develop her powers more. Her parents also contacted the head of the academy, saying that she will be treated not as a princess but as a student of their own. This will allow her to find her true self and to fully grow from the experiences that will enrich her life. [hr] [center][color=#E18BB7][h3]Combat[/h3][/color][/center] [color=#4362BD][u][b]Fighting Style[/b][/u][/color] Helena sees herself to be fit with both the roles of a mage and a support, focusing more on long-range light attacks and harnessing her magic to support her allies and to trick her enemies. She dislikes fights that require physical contact, but she uses her nimbleness to run about to provide support for her friends, going to their sides quickly to aid them. She uses a scepter whenever she is in human form that helps draw out her power from within her, as using it also helps her in focusing her magic. She is more adept in controlling her magic when in carbuncle form. Her Aunt Fiona also sees to it that she will be knowledgeable with the use of, at least, a dagger, to help her out more in times of great peril. [color=#E18BB7][u][b]Strengths[/b][/u][/color] [list][*]Use of long-range and wide AOE magic [*]Tricking and misleading enemies [*]Providing moral and magical support for allies[/list] [color=#4362BD][u][b]Weaknesses[/b][/u][/color] [list][*]Any form of close combat [*]Feats of strength [*]Lack of prowess towards actual fighting [*]Prone to panic when deeply stressed in battle due to her upbringing as a princess[/list] [color=#E18BB7][u][b]Equipment[/b][/u][/color] [url=https://assets.bigcartel.com/product_images/185212995/IMG_1985b.jpg?auto=format&fit=max&h=1000&w=1000]Crystal Scepter[/url] [url=https://gbf.wiki/images/thumb/5/50/Rose_Crystal_Knife.png/462px-Rose_Crystal_Knife.png]Crystal Dagger[/url] [hr] [center][color=#4362BD][h3]Power/Magic Abilities[/h3][/color][/center] [color=#E18BB7][u][b]Powers[/b][/u][/color] >> Light Magic = Carbuncles have mastery over controlling and generating light using the crystals on their forehead. All of the carbuncles' magic are based on and heavily affected by the presence of light, though like her kin, Helena can emit her own bright light from her crystal to blind enemies or to light up a dark space. She and her could even use their crystals as horns to outright attack enemies because of their hardness. > Illusion - Helena can bend light to control how others could see her and her targets, but it won't change their voices so they should be fine as long as they don't speak. She is also naturally immune to light-based illusions as well. > Invisibility - Helena can also bend light in a way to make herself invisible to the naked eye. > Light Attack - She can focus light from her scepter or her own crystal to let out a beam of light or more, capable of blasting enemies away. She can also release focused light in waves and spheres. > Purifying Light - She can use her light to heal wounds or purify things corrupted by darkness. > Benevolent Aura - Helena can emit an aura from her crystal that can make anyone near her feel relaxed and at ease. >> Agility - Helena is quick and nimble, but she is faster when in her carbuncle form, able to outrun enemies and climb trees naturally faster. [color=#4362BD][u][b]Weaknesses/Limitations[/b][/u][/color] >> Absolute Darkness - Because all of the magic of the carbuncle are based on light, they are useless when it comes to very dark places. Though they can generate light of their own, it uses up more of their magic reservoir than using the light available in their surroundings. >> Physical Power - Carbuncles may not be that known, but they are definitely not noted for their physical strength. Any other physically stronger being can easily defeat a carbuncle. >> Crystal - The crystal on their forehead are the source of magic and power of a carbuncle. They may be hard but they can still be broken with enough force. When broken, Helena totally loses her power and has to wait for her crystal to naturally regenerate into its former glory to regain her magic. >> Knowledge of the World - Helena's kin have been living in secrecy in their own kingdom, only getting bits of news delivered by messengers and scouts. Other beings could use Helena's lack of knowledge of the outside world against her. She will even be prone to culture shock. >> Princess - She is not a trained fighter nor did she grew up having to fight for her life. She may find herself become stressed out when the pressure of a battle takes over her completely, though she would eventually become more relaxed as she spent more time in the academy. [center][color=#E18BB7][h3]Extra[/h3][/color][/center] She has an English accent :D [hr] [/hider]