[@Framing A Moose] Got a moment before a meeting, so here is my feedback! I'm loving her, btw ^^ 
[list][*]Her age is off - the current date is September 2020, so if she was born in 1998 in February, she would be 22 years old.
[*]For the tattoos going down her arm, I'm getting that she has a lot so just list 2-3 of them that catch the eye and that should be fine
[*]With her fear of People, I recommend being more specific here (i.e. Human Supremacists, Gun Owners, Purifiers...) since otherwise, that means she will be afraid of well, everyone (unless that's what you are going for!)[/list]