[@Ellri] Ping for edits done [sub](Sorry that it took a little while!)[/sub]

(also I somehow broke the middle hider despite not adding any further hiders or formatting, not sure how to fix it but I've been ripping my hair out the whole week trying to sort it out, help appreciated - if there is in fact, a way to fix it and I haven't just perma-broke the code XD)

Some notes regarding some of the corrections

[b]Choice of Master[/b] : I have plans to have her join up with one of [@EldaronI] 's characters who I have now linked under associates, but I was awaiting a name decision/CS post from him, so I've added Qakrii in, but blanketed her under Acharon for now as a secondary/back up, but she will be joining up with Qakrii if all goes well and Qakrii is accepted in 

[b]Associates[/b] : It may be because I've worded it poorly, but it wasn't necessarily her father choosing to train her that was found suspect, but that the two very clearly had a deep emotional bond/attachment that made them more loyal to [i]one another[/i] than to the [i]Empire as a whole[/i] and therefore, I feel the other Sith would have become at least a bit suspicious/wary of that; now that Noctis is dead, that particular threat is "over" as Aria has no other family to speak of that she could run to, thus leaving her no choice but to stay loyal to the Empire. I've reworded that bit to hopefully make that a bit clearer, but if it requires further re-wording do let me know! 

All other edits made as requested! :)