[@LadyAnnaLee]Very interesting! I do have some questions. 1. Right off the bat, and this is mostly just a technicality, I'm worried about Ashe's weight. For a height of 5'11, very tall for a female, Ashe is [i]really[/i] straddling the underweight mark. At that sort of BMI, Ashe would not have anywhere near the energy to compete in Gamer's Nightmare as you've described it. If they're meant to be physically fit you'll want to up that weight a good amount; I'd recommend something like 160. Either that or make them about 6 inches shorter for a weight of 135. (I know that seems like nitpicking, but I'm underweight myself and it sucks so I like to keep an eye on weights, lol) 2. I'm slightly confused about Ashe's personality. They come across as a bit contradictory; sometimes reclusive, sometimes not. Can you shed some light on that? Also, I'm a little confused about this splash of self hatred at the end of the bio. Where did that come from? 3. How/when did Ashe get into Gamer's Nightmare? I'm interested in the transition from passionate dancer to hardcore pro gamer. Also, how does she make her money? Twitch donations? Corporate sponsorships? 4. Oh boy, that's a rough story about poor Gregory. Was Navy a flight risk before she Reunited? The soul bond can make you do some crazy things, but up and abandoning your baby (not to mention locking it alone in your house, presumably to die) is pretty extreme. She would have needed to have that sinister side somewhere in her before Reuniting to stoop that low. Is that the case? 5. Where did Ashe grow up? Do they live in the same place now? 6. Maybe the heat tonight melted my brain, but how exactly does Ashe feel about this trip? Still unenthusiastic, or coming around to the idea?