[quote=@Lasersquid112] I'll fix the Core Beliefs. Two main reasons: As you stated before, what a character doesn't understand fully about what they're doing is powered by pure, raw magical energy - a presumably finite resource. Patrick can't use it 24/7 to get him out of trouble, and thus has relegated it to either emergency use or travel. The other reason is that Patrick loves technology and innovation. Something he really wants to create, or at least see, is a successful suit of magitech armor. [/quote] Make it so that his ship is an amplifier that lets him use his energy draining magic on a larger scale, and I have no complaints. Otherwise if he has enough energy to jump an entire ship what is certainly lightyears at a time, teleporting himself indefinitely would be no issue. You're pretty much good. [@Hammerman] I see no major issues with the character, you're good. Out of curiosity, where and when did she get her ship?