Minor additional review, based on some of your edits, [@GrizzTheMauler].

[b]ownerships:[/b]
While almost anyone in the Republic military has got to like the idea of an imperial fighter being put inside a Fury Interceptor, the Imperial navy tends to frown upon it, as there’s simply not enough room and the “landing” would have detrimental and explosive results.

A fury-class interceptor doesn’t have a hangar, nor does it have the features to attach a fighter to the outer hull. Transporting such a vessel as your Sith’s fighter would require a larger ship, such as a Gage-class transport or a Terminus-class Destroyer.



[b]Associates/Underlings:[/b]
Your apprentice—Morrigan Organa—either needs to be born of House Organa on Alderaan (which would require some creative storytelling to explain as an imperial human. That house is known to be fairly pro-Jedi), or be named something else, as that last name belongs to a fairly major Alderaanian family.

[b]Other sections:[/b]
It would still be much appreciated if you could elaborate a bit more on political associates, flaws, achievements, failures, interests and such. 
A single sentence or less for each rarely gives a good feel for how it affects the character. More meat, as Sini put it, would be very nice. 

Though some of this may be a result of what looks like incomplete work from after previous review.