ok, [@Dusty]... a few questions and a couple of smaller bits and some thoughts...

[list][*]Out of curiosity... Is there a reason you chose such great height? Anything you intend to play on/explore ICly with that?
[*]Your Force technique tree feels somewhat "flat" with everything he knows being intermediate or higher. 
[list][*]Perhaps add in some differentiation for it?
[*]Something he's not as good at?
[*]We would think he has not trained equally well in all the ten techniques on Intermediate level.
[*]Additionally, he appears to have zero natural talents, is that intentional?[/list]
[*]The description you have for his use of the Force is practically textbook Force Rage. Thus we would ask that you add that to his list. Probably around advanced level.
[*]We would also like you to consider altering the level of his Force Drain down a bit, but make it a natural talent, to balance out the addition of Force Rage.
[*]Why does he have a faulty cybernetic arm? has Darth Embrus refused him to acquire anything more reliable?
[*]Could you add something about that arm to his flaws?
[*]We like the fact that he is a Sith that is satisfied where he is in the hierarchy. So many people forget that while Sith generally desire to improve always, not all seek to rise through the ranks.
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