[quote=@role model] You're going to have to instruct what exactly you want if you cannot approve me, which makes me feel like a lousy XMen story reader. [/quote] As [@Hound55] stated, this has nothing to do with your ability to read comics. It's great that you know the canon Angel but the main idea of Absolute is to take a character and then reimagine them, redefine them how you'd like to see them done and then put them into the world that the game has created. Therefore it's very important that you read the former X-Men player's [url=https://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/4862818]sheet[/url] and [url=https://www.roleplayerguild.com/search?topic_id=177037&post_types=ic&unames=ComradeMaxx&term=]posts[/url]. Additionally, you should generally read over the other character sheets to get a better idea of the game and how it works. Absolute Comics is a bit different from a lot of other group RPs on RPG. It's not as collaborative and requires players to be very self-motivated and driven. This is not a game where I'm going to instruct you exactly what to do. That said, on your sheet, under the 'Character Concept' heading you still don't have the correct information. What you've told me there are simply more motivations and reasons for choosing Angel. That's fine, but that belongs under 'Motivations and Goals'. Under 'Character Concept' I want you to tell me the character's history or biography. Look at the other [url=https://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/177037-absolute-comics-a-dc-marvel-singular-universe-rp-recruiting-for-seaso/char]Character Sheets[/url], you'll notice the first section sets the character up with a brief description of who they are and how they came to be.