[@role model] First off, I appreciate all of the effort you put into your application and the time you took to amend it to try to meet my standards. That said, however, even with the newest sheet submitted, I don't think you'll be a good fit for this roleplay and won't be taking you on as a player.  

The character sheet still fails to meet the standards I have for the game and displays a misunderstanding of the game's world and nuances. You've expressed frustrations and openly admitted to misunderstanding the game's concept and how the narrative works and this is still clearly evident in the sheet's current revisions. I do admire your eagerness and enthusiasm but with the amount of instruction you've required for the construction of the CS, I don't think you'll mesh with the rest of the player base nor be able to integrate yourself into the IC and the game's narrative. 

Again, I thank you for your time and patience and I hope you find a more fitting roleplay! My apologies it didn't work out this time.

All the best.