Cragdor's sheet looks solid, [@Lord Greshh]. This lizard's got a very reasonable motivation that integrates nicely with his weakness. Good work!

His rank depends on how many years spent with Scarlet Moons. If Cragdor joined right after Yavin, he'd probably worked his way up to a sergeant now. If he signed up within the last year or two, then corporal is more likely. While we're on the topic of time, I recommend adding some specific years in his background, so it's easier to connect to galactic events.

Other than the above, let's see if [@Zoey White] has anything to say.