[@LunarisDaFox]: All right, more to say even before you're done. Alright, let's start with the elephant in the room: the character's got her rapist dad half-sealed away inside of her, and she's completely okay with it. Not only that, but despite an apparent seal (complete with absolute obedience), it looks like the old man's got all the powers from before (so the seal is, like, half useless). Also, again, rapist dad. That does not jive well with the demigod of vengeance we have, who will absolutely annihilate them given the chance. Because, like... It's rape. You don't just [i]forgive[/i] rape. Yeah, you exist because of that, but despite however many years pass, well... I mean, the deed is inherently taboo in pretty much every nation and scenario I can think of, so... Yeah. On top of that, no limits for the summoning process itself, with capabilities that far outstrip that of... Most of the cast, I'd say? I don't think I like that. Also, Amaterasu lite without counterplay... Yeah, I'm not sure if I'd like designing encounters around that. And, like, this is 'the strongest' one, so... There are more. So she's a summoner with OP summons and then scaled that up way too hard. Yikes. While we're on the topic of abilities, though, I'm not sure what relevance the second part of 'shadow smithing' has to the actual... Well, ability, I guess? Next: I'd actually recommend (heavily recommend, in fact) that you run what you've written through some sort of word processor for spellcheck purposes. I caught about a few dozen individual spelling and grammatical errors that make it somewhat difficult to interpret what's being written, and cleaning up the legibility of your writing can go a long way in making it easier to convey the intent and direction of a given post. That... Should be it? There was a lot to pick apart already, and I've finally had the time to just sit down and sift through it all. I'll chime in if there's more later.