Several more changes, [@Torack]: 

Since Arosha is 31 years old, she would've grown up during the final years of the Republic, and been taught pro-Republic, instead of Pro-Empire, philosophies. Besides adjusting this, I'd like to see her reflect on the difference between Republic and Imperial eras. Arosha likely advised her senator in the Imperial Senate, near to the point of its disbandment.

The last paragraph of Outlook and Motivation still mentions the First Order; switch it out for Imperial Remnants.

Since Arosha is a newcomer to Scarlet Moons, a senior enlisted rank like sergeant is unlikely. Her accomplishments would earn her a commission as lieutenant, if she provided the credentials. Otherwise, she would be a specialist.