Alright, as you requested I have taken a number of measures in line with the criticism provided (I suppose what I list here is technically the tl;dr version):

-Information has been condensed in areas that did not perfectly fall in line with your provided details.  Information that could smoothly be re-formatted into other areas has been accounted for and the overall positioning of details provided are more in-line with what has been requested.

-NP Descriptions and Vague Skill Descriptions have been adjusted to include an interpretation of what said abilities should be expected to do.  In conjunction with the thought process that came with what I did to the Bathory plot I figured that the easier that I make understanding said character the more prepared anyone would be to do it.

-The Bathory sub-plot has been scratched, entirely.  Admittedly, when I take a step back and think about it as a Master intended for Blavatsky, adding Bathory into the mix makes little sense.  So adjustments have been made to the OC to make them feel like someone who would summon Blavatsky.

-Details concerning the Clock Tower in the bio have been switched around to be more in-line with what I would imagine the Blavatskys would accept, considering how other details have been changed.

And well in regards to inspiration the thought process behind it is that if someone does Blavatsky for my Master, I would do X Servant for them with them being the Master of said Servant. Of course there's the chance that someone would want to play as Blavatsky (which would decrease the workload) but considering the chances of someone available wanting to do Blavatsky that is why I offer an equivalent exchange.

But I suppose that doing something like that makes it all the more important that Blavatsky is understood properly.  I don't mind if I am unable to jump into the RP immediately due to restricted space or lack of currently free Masters, but I would prefer that my OC is still perfected to the point that they are ready regardless.

[@PKMNB0Y] I hope these changes are to your liking.  Time for me to sleep, if I stay up too much longer it'll be morning lol.