[h3]Review of Vasnai’Brinme[/h3]

Suggestion: Add these two fields to the Holonet Ad section:
[code][b]Owner: [/b]
[b]Previous Owner(s): [/b][/code]

Possible other fields to consider adding: (you can reflavor them if you feel something else would be better)
[code][b]Degree of Loyalty: [/b]
[b]Ease of Training: [/b]
[b]Resale Price: [/b][/code]


Force throw is a subset variant of Telekinesis. It is unusual with a talent for a subset without having talent for the core ability.

Idle musing: we suppose that there’s no better example of having a price on one’s head than being a slave. 

[u]Possessions section:[/u]
While slaves do not have property, they are likely to have been provided specified clothes and objects owned by their master for personal use in ways that benefit their master. Other than when it is specifically of benefit to the master, she is unlikely to walk about completely nude, right?

Think about what she might have with that in mind. Some things to consider:
[b]Clothes[/b] - Is she provided only one set or multiple sets?
[b]Shock collar[/b] - Does her master use that on her? If yes, always or only occasionally?
[b]Collar with Leash[/b] - Does her master use that on her? If yes, always or only occasionally?
[b]Communicator[/b] - Does she have one? If yes, are there hard-wired limits as to who/what it can communicate with? If she has one, where is it located?
Self-defense tools - Is she always by her master’s side and protected, or does she have access to equipment to defend herself when elsewhere at her master’s behest?
[b]Kill Switch Implant[/b] - Is she enough of a prize possession that her master would rather have her dead than in the possession of anyone else? If she has one, what would trigger it and does she know about it?

We are not saying she should have all of these, but that you should consider which of them she might have, and which she definitely doesn’t have.

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In this era, Force Sensitivity cannot be tested properly at birth. Imperial children are tested fairly early in childhood, the time depending, among other things, on their ancestry and prominence. Even species such as Sith Purebloods who are 99.99% force sensitive are not defined as Force-sensitive until they prove it somehow in their early childhood. 

Was her mother a Sith at the time of the birth? If so, what rank did she hold?
Where was she born? If in the empire, why was she sold to a hutt rather than one of the imperial slave markets?

With the above in mind… What compelled her mother to sell her? Was her father involved in anything?
If you can’t find another justification while taking the above in mind, perhaps one child went with the mother, the other with the father, then the father died, got into debt or some such thing, which caused her to become hutt property?


Something about the name “Biothem” doesn’t feel “hutty” to us. It feels a lot like it is Biochem with just one letter replaced. No idea if this thingy is good, but [url=https://www.fantasynamegenerators.com/sw-hutt-names.php]here’s a hutt name generator we found just now.[/url]


If she grew up knowing nothing but slavery… what made her hate the situation she is in? Remember, indoctrination/stockholm syndrome can cause people to accept the strangest things. We don’t mind her hating the situation. We just want to know how that hate came into being and (ideally) roughly when it started forming. Is her master aware of it?