I read my competitors entries and my vote goes to Calle. 

It wasn't easy because both stories were written well.
I chose Calle's story as the better of the two others because I feel the first contest rule was better portrayed. Also, it felt more being in the action while Fiber's story felt, to me, more of being a spectator with a narrative voice in the background.

That being said, I applaud to Calle and Fiber for making such wonderful stories.