I've read the entries and here is my vote:

A Country In Ruins

As for feedback: I wish I could give detailed critiques about technical writing, grammar and spelling etc but I am too inexperienced myself to do so. However, I can tell which entry I liked best based on how I enjoyed reading it, how easy it was to read, how the story progressed and how intrigued I got by the myth in it.

Based on those criteria I felt A Country In Ruins is the better one therefor that entry gets my vote.