Sounds like fairly reasonable solutions.

Still feels odd of course to see someone sell their child, but at least there's a fairly reasonable reason.

Minor thought: Could there perhaps be a part of the sale agreement that she is ideally not to be resold, or at least to be kept out of imperial hands? Or were the imperial ties of her mother kept secret?

There's no doubt more we could've nitpicked at, but you covered the important parts we spotted fairly well. We'll see about having another GM check these two sheets to see if they too feel they are ready for approval.