Hah, nice work, OWO.

I'd suggest you just think about what you want her focus to be though. Do you want her to be able to fight, but use some magic, then maker her class Adventurer. If you want to focus on magic, make her a Mage. There's no rule or anything that says Adventurers can't learn and use magic (see; Bell Cranel, Welf Crozzo and Ryuu Lion), nor that mages can't actually fight (see: Riveria).

The classes are mostly there to help you decide what you want to focus on majorly. Also, don't forget to vote for what Goddess you want from the little list, and don't forget to add the 'Class' and 'Familia' sections to your sheet (check the updated Character Sheet in the first post of the OOC).

Other then that, Dahlia looks real nice. I don't see any reason why I shouldn't accept her right now. So once you finish editing the missing bits, I'll go ahead and contact you cia PM regarding stats and skills and whatnot. :)