[@Zoey White] Alrighty, so I've looked over your character and I think there are things that should be changed. - [b]Her name.[/b] I see that Critical Role reference. While I've listened to some of their podcasts and love all the characters I don't think that you should reference that here. I would prefer if you changed it. - [b]Her personality.[/b] It isn't really fitting of a noble to act in such a way, especially one that's related to the Speaker of Mordlind. Sherry is sassy in her own right, but she doesn't joke around and takes things pretty seriously. - [b]Fighting Style/Equipment.[/b] There's no such thing as a Training Staff in FE. If you want her to focus on the lance, it must abide to FE's weapon rules. A bendy lance is kind of useless. She'd use a Training Lance instead. - [b]Her backstory.[/b] The Officers Academy isn't really a place where people are sent to be taught how to be proper. Individuals go there willingly because of its prestige and because of how the Officers Academy prepares them in becoming heads of Houses, nations, or well-rounded nobility. That being said, she's going to have to WANT to be there-- there's no one stopping her from leaving. [b]- Other tidbits.[/b] I find it amusing that she's not a fan of the religious types if she's gonna be residing in the vicinity of a cathedral. Either she'll have to keep it under wraps or she's not gonna be liked by the NPCs. Also, refrain using the term "badass" in her likes and instead try to be more specific.