[quote=@Gareth]
[@Bluetommy] When you get a chance to review Lmpkio's c.s. I'd like to know if it's what you are looking for.  

Because it seems like a full blown ordeal.  

I was sort of expecting this to take a slightly simpler style to it.  


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I may have went a little overboard with my character's story, but frankly had no idea what the GM wanted.

I imagine it'll be simpler, although I can't speak on behalf of the GM. I definitely don't think it'll have to be as long or complex as mine.