[@EvictedElement] - There's so much detail that any question or nitpick I could have had was quickly answered, I feel humbled to have your character apply if only because it does set a bar for everyone. That said I'm greatly looking forward to seeing Gill interact with new people and I'm very happy to [color=yellow]accept[/color] him without any urgent questions, please feel free to add him to the character tab at your convenience. 

[@Trainerblue192] - There's something missing from your sheet, and I apologize if I hadn't been clear, but the Reason for Enlistment is supposed to be a writing example. If you could fix that part, I think the rest of the sheet is solid.

[@Bounce] - You answered a lot of things in our back and forth in PMs, I'm glad to see the completed CS. He's [color=yellow]accepted[/color], go ahead and move him over!

[@Achronum] - it's okay I guess so you can be [color=yellow]accepted[/color] I suppose [sub]I can't wait for the insistent terminology[/sub] and good job with the name

[@Amalyra] - I feel the red text used for A'lythana's text is a little too dark to read comfortably, if you could change it to something lighter I'm sure it'd be appreciated. For your sample text, the last paragraph should be broken up (the rule of thumb is new speaker, new paragraph).

[@Obscene Symphony] - Too hot [color=red]DENIED[/color] please see yourself out [sub][color=yellow]or move him over I guess[/color][/sub]

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Think that's everyone that has given me a CS so far, a few need some changes before they can get accepted, please tag me whenever they're updated! Thank you!