Alright, [@POOHEAD189], your guy looks very promising. However, there's a bit more you have to do, before we accept him.

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[*]The image is not very helpful in terms of appearance, since most of what we see is Cleomenes' helmet. I'd like you to replace it with a Zabrak face, if possible. 
[*]Related to the above, I need more written details on appearance. What does he wear when not in combat? In what way does his movement "command respect"?
[*]Expand the section regarding Cleo's service with the rebellion. Was he a sympathetic mercenary or part of their main forces? Scarlet Moons wasn't with the Rebel Alliance until very recently, so how did Cleo find them?
[*]Where and how did he defeat a Madalorian? Also, having a full suit of Mando armor without being a Madalorian is pretty rare. It would be more reasonable if several pieces are broken.
[*]Not respecting command in itself is not a weakness. What negative consequences did Cleo suffer as a result? Maybe he disregarded intel and stepped on a landmine?
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Other than the above, your character is well-constructed. Keep up the good work!