That was fun, I enjoyed it. :)
Nothing needs adjusting, other than Leela either having misheard or misremembered, since the prostitute had suggested she go to the [i]Guild[/i], not a Familia. But given her penchant for not paying much attention, I don't see a need to edit that. Who knows, she might just mistake the Guild House for a Familia's Home... xD

Gonna work on NPCs all day today, unless Duoya and OWO post as well, in which case I'll also need to do IC-stuff. :P