[@Typical] I'd say for her ability, if she has any less than full health, she gains +1 SPD and +1 LCK, but that bonus becomes +2 each when she is on critical or minimal health. There's not really any numeric tracking for health, just general approximation. I don't expect people to take more than a few hits per chapter.

Everything else seems to check out though, so if you accept that change then you're in.